Writing a narrative story

Writing a Narrative Learning Story

Success Criteria	We are learning to entertain an audience with a captivating narrative.
I have the key parts of a narrative. -Beginning -hook -setting -character introduction *Middle -problem arising -character development Ending -resolution I have included -Interesting descriptive words -A variety of sentence types -Paragraphs that show how I’m organizing the narrative.	Once upon a time there was a evil mako shark Ziontula.  He was imprisoned at the Awhina Asylum. He was feared by all because he’s destroyed planet after planet and earth was next on his list Mwahahahaha! . He was unstoppable. He has razor sharp teeth and red laser eyes. A lot of people were trying to kill him with their mp5s  ak47s. and their sniper rifles. But Ziontula had a flamethrower, so he could burn their guns. But then one day he mysteriously was put behind bars at the inescapable Awhina Asylum. Who put him there? No one knows, how and when is puzzling. It must of been Antiger his archenemy. Ziontula tried and tried to escape but he wasn't able to get out but there was only 1 way. 2 hours later “along comes daddy Antiger”. He was back for revenge  his beloved planet Jupiter has been blown up by a vicious nuclear bomb and he and his strong army, his son Brooklynx was crying his eyes out, he was by himself at 163 he was so angry he took revenge. To be continued…….
My next steps:	Next time I’m writing a narrative, I will be thinking about giving more details of the setting and write the problem and resolution.